There are a lot of things I like about this picture—the contrast between the gauzy overlapping of dress and the flat gradient of the mountain for one. I also really like the color scheme. The composition looks just a bit off, though. The right edge of the dress appears to split the picture into two halves. I like how you made sure to place the seagulls on both sides of the picture, but the one on the left isn't quite as visible as the four on the right, which exacerbates the half-half look. The horizon line also splits the picture horizontally, but the white gradient partially solves the problem. The focus on the left is the woman, but the seagulls on the right provide a competing focus, since the detail and contrast of the black wingtips pulls attention away. Overall, though, I love the color scheme. You really portrayed a nice sense of peace through this picture.
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